Talk:Zoe's Big Move/@comment-24839263-20180531173219

I have found seven writing issues in the text of this page:

I'll have to correct these mistakes as soon as I can.
 * Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)
 * Punctuation in compound/complex sentences
 * Comma misues within clauses
 * Mixed dialects of English
 * Misuse of word choice
 * Improper formatting
 * Wordy sentences