Talk:F4 (Marvel NEW)/Issue 1/@comment-30134917-20180602103746

An interesting reinvention of the FF, no doubt. I personally prefer the cosmic rays origin but you're allowed to do whatever you want. I also like how you included Nick since I don't think him and Reed have many interactions in the comic. I like how you both made them the first modern heroes and newer heroes showing up.

Though a piece of criticism, I feel like you use the character's names a bit too often, you could just say "he says to the scientist" or "the scientist walks up to him" and not use "Reed" in place of "he".

All and all though, interesting beginning.