Talk:Finding Marlin/@comment-71.209.155.168-20161215204503/@comment-28488428-20161216002622

I think the lonely/depressed Marlin plot point is very good.

But why on earth are the kids being taken to learn about predators where they are in danger from being attacked? That's dangerous and not at all smart. Surely the fish would have more common sense than to do that?

Besides, Marlin getting knocked out by the predator may be too similar to Dory getting knocked out by the undertow in Finding Dory​.

I would recommend you leave the 'discovery of clues' scene the same, but add the lonely/depressed Marlin plot point.