Thread:JessicaFin23/@comment-4327179-20171025225729/@comment-4327179-20171027231305

JessicaFin23 wrote: Well, here's what I think, just for starters:

I like it but there are a few things I think we should change:
 * The story isn't as violent and bloody as the comic, but it still has a dark tone.
 * Claude Frollo kidnaps Donald, Goofy, and Kyra and brainwashes them into doing his bidding. Instead of brainwashing them slowly, he does it immediately. The Dreamkeepers set off on a mission to free them from Calude Frollo's control.
 * Claude Frollo brainwashes Donald, Goofy, and Kyra using dark magic.
 * Claude Frollo is sent by the Othersiders to turn Donald, Goofy, and Kyra into their henchmen.
 * Claude Frollo is determined to help the Othersiders take over the Magic Kingdom.
 * During their escape, the Dreamkeepers run into the Othersiders, who are angry atg the Dreamkeepers for freeing Kyra, Donald, and Goofy from Claude Frollo's control.
 * The Dreamkeepers defeat Claude Frollo using their magic powers, and Kyra defeats him by using her shapeshifting ability.

The roles should be switched and it is the Dreamkeepers who get brainwashed

And just like in Batman: The Cult, Frollo is the leader of an underground cult (who are made up of homeless people) whom he has brainwashed and made them believe that he is their messiah.

During their escape Quasimodo, Donald, Goofy, and Kyra would run into Pete (who is with Frollo to keep an eye to make sure the operation goes smoothly) and the cult members, who are angry ate them for freeing the Dreamkeepers.

And all of this (creating an cult, and recurriting and brainwashing homless people to take over the Magic Kingdom) was actually Frollo's plan which the Othersiders approved but sent Pete with him to make sure the plan goes smoothly.

What do you think?