Dialogue Cancelled (Revival/Old Page)

This is the revial for a old page or for a lost comic

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Just a quick not to say that I’m looking forward to working with you on this! I can’t wai t to see what you do with it! My scripts have been accused of looking like technical ins truc tions, but pu. len ase keep in mind that as far as I’m concerned, you should feel free to tweak b. things here or t here   if you think it’ll make for a better book. You’re a better visual storyteller than me, so I promise I won’t be a diva if you change anything! Hope you dig the script!�PAGE 1 1.1 We open on a shot of the muddy banks of a j river at NIGHT. Seven shadowy FIGURES can be seen through the veil of darkness. We may not be able to count them here as they tend to blend together. They appear as little more than shades, but this is a group of fleeing warriors. NO DIALOGUE. 1.2 Closer on the warriors as they con tinue running through the shadows. There are seven warriors in all. They are all covered in sweat and blood and     Is usjsjsjnumerous (mostly minor) injuries. They are dressed for battle. Most are in leather jerkins, carrying wooden shields (some cracked or broken), and swords or axes. Some of them wear cone-shaped helms. They splash through the mud and ankle-deep water. We may not see them all cleh. arly in this panel, but I’ll list them here for convenience (Not all of them are going to have names, though, because we’re gonna kill them off shortly). • RIKARD – This is our hero (yes, I changed his name from the pitch material). He is a handsome young man with thick, long blonde hair. He looks like a fairy tale prince in some ways. He is not wearing a helm, and his face is smudged with   and dirt. He is physically strong, but he’s not a giant by any means. He carries an axe and a dagger. • KIRK – Rikard’s father. He is in his forties, and the years have not been kind. He is a stout man, bearded, deeply wrinkled about the eyes. He is without a helm. He grasps a heavy axe and a shield (the top portion of which has been hacked off). • SHAD – Rikard’s best friend. He is a dark-haired young man, thin but wiry. He has a mean look to him. A cut runs across his forehead, and blood runs down his face. He is armed with a sword, but he holds it loosely in an arm that hangs limply at his side. Blood soaks his sleeve, and he clutches his shoulder with his free hand. • WARRIOR 1 – A large man, more heavily armored than the others. He wears a helm. A couple of arrows are lodged in his arm and in his shield. • WARRIOR 2 – He clutches a crumpled cloth to his throat. The cloth is soaked with blood. The man’s beard is matted with blood as well. Through the slits in his helmet, we see that his eyes are wild. • WARRIOR 3 – A frightened-looking man. He is thin. Although he still wears a helmet, the helm looks like it was almost cracked in two by a terrible blow. It’s amazing the man survived. He looks back behind him with fear in his eyes. • WARRIOR 4 – A rugged-looking man with gray hair pulled back from his face. He grimaces as he presses forward. NO DIALOGUE. (Cont’d.) 1.3 Warrior 2 slips and falls to his hands and knees in the dark water, splashing down and dropping his bloody cloth into the river. Rikard is already kneeling beside him, helping him to his feet. The other warriors continue on their way. 1/RIKARD:​On your feet! 2/RIKARD:​We can’t stop to rest just yet. 1.4 On Warrior 2 and Rikard. Rikard pulls the man to his feet, an arm slung over his shoulder. Warrior 2 now clutches his hand to his throat, and blood sluices through this fingers. 3/WARRIOR 2:​Leave me, Rikard. I’m finished. 4/WARRIOR 2:​I’m going to die. 5/RIKARD:​Yes. 6/RIKARD:​But not on your knees. 1.5 Angle past the bloodied rag floating on the river’s surface, the blood seeping out into the water. Rikard holds Warrior 2 in the background, and he is looking out past the rag at something we cannot see. Rikard’s face is a mask of awe and fright. NO DIALOGUE. �PAGES 2 and 3 Double-page Spread. A large panel runs across the top with several smaller panels along the bottom. 2/3.1 Angle from behind Rikard and Warrior 2. Warrior 2 is looking down, but Rikard looks across the river’s dark surface. The bloody rag floats toward a GHOSTLY FIGURE standing in the middle of what should be the deep part of the river. The figure is the ghost-like spitting image of Rikard. The specter stands tall and proud, but the expression on his face is somewhat sad. He holds a sword in both hands, as if offering it to someone. While it appears that all color has washed away from specter’s form (leaving only a pale, softly glowing coloration), tears of blood (which are BRIGHT RED) roll down the creature’s cheeks, down its body in long trails, and spills into the river below him. The red pool of blood spreads around the grim vision, and its color is bright on the water’s surface. NO DIALOGUE. 2/3.2 Close on Rikard’s shocked face. NO DIALOGUE. 2/3.3 Close on the ghostly image of Rikard. His face is expressionless. He might as well be a statue save for the tears of blood oozing down his face. NO DIALOGUE. 2/3.4 On the warriors, Kirk in particular. They are sloshing ahead, but Kirk looks back, spittle flying from his lips as he calls to his son. 1/KIRK:​Rikard! 2/KIRK:​Keep moving, boy! They’re right behind us! 2/3.5 On Rikard and Warrior 2. Rikard turns his head to his father, calling back to him. Warrior 2 is fading fast. He’s slumping forward even though Rikard has hold of him. 3/RIKARD:​But, father, I saw— �PAGE 4 4.1 Angle past Rikard as he looks out across the river’s surface. The ghostly image has gone. The blood in the water has vanished. Only the bloodied cloth remains. NO DIALOGUE. 4.2 Close on Rikard, puzzled and more rattled than before. 1/KIRK (Off-panel):​I don’t care what you saw! 4.3 On Kirk, yelling. Behind him, the other warriors are so far along that they are vanishing into the shadow. 2/KIRK:​If you don’t keep moving, you’ll be cut to ribbons like all the rest! 3/KIRK:​And drop that dead weight! It’s only slowing you down! 4.4 On Rikard and Warrior 2. Curiously, Rikard looks to the man he’s helping. The man, however, is slumping down, his head lolling back (the cut on his throat ghastly). His mouth is agape and his eyes are rolled back to the whites. He’s dead. 4/RIKARD:​Dead weight? 5/RIKARD:​But— 4.5 Rikard lets Warrior 2 slip down into the water. NO DIALOGUE. �PAGE 5 5.1 Rikard grimly forges ahead, leaving the body of Warrior 2 behind him. NO DIALOGUE. 5.2 On the warriors, pressing forward as Rikard joins them. None of them look back, except for Kirk, who glances back to make sure his son is with them. NO DIALOGUE. 5.3 On the face of Warrior 2, floating in the river, but beginning to sink. His blood clouds the dark water. NO DIALOGUE. 5.4 As previous, but Warrior 2 has sunk beneath the surface. NO DIALOGUE. 5.5 A BOOT splashes down into the water near the dead body. Another warrior wearing a mish-mash of leather and fur moves past. NO DIALOGUE. �PAGE 6 6.1 This is a shot of the SAVAGES who are pursuing the rag-tag group. This is a fierce group, dressed in furs and leather. They are bearded wildmen, and the fingers of their fallen enemies have been braided into their beards. Some of them may wear necklaces of ears. Their weapons are strangely hooked and serrated and curved. Some of them might be armed with bows, and they have arrows at the ready. A few of them carry guttering torches. They are covered in dried blood and dirt and spit. There are a dozen of them, snarling and slavering as they rush through the mud and water. The LEADER is a few steps ahead of the rest, and he holds several disfigured DOGS on barbed chains. The dogs look like mastiffs that have been skinned and wrapped in something like barbed-wire. The dogs bark ferociously and pull against their chains. NO DIALOGUE. 6.2 Close on the hideous dogs, barking and spitting. NO DIALOGUE. �PAGE 7 7.1 CUT to an establishing shot of a FORTIFIED VILLAGE. We angle past the shadowy forms of Rikard and the others as they approach. The forest pools back, leaving a field of hastily chopped tree stumps leading up to a wall of timber. The logs comprising the wall lean and canter in the mud as if erected quickly, but they are sturdy and cut to a point. Torches burn at the sides of a sealed gate (it, too, is a ramshackle thing, not on hinges but heavy and requiring several men to move). In addition, there are HUMAN HEADS (the heads of dead wildmen) on pikes along the muddy trail leading to the village gate. 1/WARRIOR 3 (Yelling):​Open the gate! 2/WARRIOR 3 (Yelling):​They’re right behind us! 3/WARRIOR 3 (Yelling):​Open up, damn it! 7.2 Close on Warrior 3 as he turns to look into the darkness behind him. Kirk stands next to him. He places a hand on the warrior’s shoulder, trying to calm him, but he still looks terrified. 4/WARRIOR 3 (Small):​Open up. 5/KIRK:​They can’t open the gate because we’re being followed. 6/KIRK:​If we’d been a few steps faster… if we had a little more distance between us. 7.3 On Kirk, spitting out the words with grim resolve. ​7/KIRK:​But if they open the gates now, those beasts would get inside. ​8/KIRK:​They’d slaughter many before they were brought down. (Cont’d.)� 7.4 Rikard whirls around to face whatever it is that’s coming up behind them. He has his axe in one hand, his dagger in the other. He’s a badass and it shows. The others are behind him. It looks almost as if Rikard is standing guard before everyone. Nearby is one of the heads on a stick. It seems to be looking in the same direction as Rikard. 9/RIKARD:​We tried running. 10/RIKARD:​It didn’t work. 7.5 The Savages emerge from the darkness. They are stalking up slowly, menacingly. The dogs on their chains are snarling and slobbering and pulling forward, ready to kill. 11/RIKARD (Off-panel):​Now…either way… we fight! ​� PAGE 8 ​ 8.1 Close on the leader of the wildmen, sneering. He knows these men cannot stand against him and his forces. NO DIALOGUE. 8.2 On Rikard, with a deft movement, he slashes his axe out and cuts the pike that holds the dead man’s head. The head topples through the air. NO DIALOGUE. 8.3 Close on the Wildman leader, his eyes narrow, his sneer fading. NO DIALOGUE. 8.4 Still staring toward his enemies, Rikard places a foot on the dead man’s severed head. NO DIALOGUE. 8.5 Close on the dead man’s head beneath Rikard’s boot. As Rikard applies pressure, the eyes bulge, the tongue lolls from the mouth. The rotted flesh is giving way, the teeth being pushed out from festering gums. NO DIALOGUE. 8.6 On the savages. The leader is screaming now, and he’s released the dogs. The beasts throw themselves toward their prey. The other savages ready for the fight to come. 1/LEADER (Scream):​Raaaawwwwwwwrrrrrrr! � PAGE 9 9.1 On Rikard as the dogs attack. Some of the beasts dart around him, scurrying in the dirt as they try to flank him. They are hunched, snapping, annoying things. Another dog leaps into the air, but Rikard is swatting it down with his axe, the blade buried in the animal’s side. Arrows fly through the air, zipping past. NO DIALOGUE. 9.2 On Kirk, Shad, and Warrior 3. Kirk raises his broken shield, and a couple of arrows thump into it. Shad’s wounded arm is limp at his side, but he has his bloodied sword in his other hand. He looks ready to fight. Warrior 3 looks terrified. 1/WARRIOR 3 (Small):​T-They take the bodies… 2/WARRIOR 3 (Small):​We never find the bodies… What do they do with them? 3/WARRIOR 3 (Small):​I… I can’t let them take me… 4/SHAD:​Stop your mewling and start fighting… 9.3 Let’s give them a shot of the good guys charging the bad guys here. Rikard is in the front of his friends, and he is surrounded by the bloody carnage of several dead hounds. The other warriors are charging, weapons and shields drawn. The wildmen are charging, too, and a couple of them are launching arrows at our heroes. 5/SHAD:​…or I’ll give you to them myself! �PAGE 10 10.1 On Rikard. He is charging forward, and he’s hurling his dagger right at the “camera.” With his other hand, he swings his axe down and back (almost like a haphazard golf club swing). NO DIALOGUE. 10.2 On the savage leader and one of his warriors. Rikard’s dagger thumps into the soldier’s forehead, embedding itself in the man’s skull. His head snaps back and he wears a look of shock. The leader glances toward the man. NO DIALOGUE. 10.3 Rikard strikes, now holding the handle of his axe with both hands. While the leader is distracted, Rikard hits him in the chin with a brutal uppercut style swing. The leader’s head snaps back and blood sprays into the air. Rikard has split the man from chest to forehead. NO DIALOGUE. 10.4 The leader flops to the side. Rikard stands before him, looking every bit like some shadowy spirit of death. 1/RIKARD (Small):​Come on then. 10.5 The warriors and savages charge each other. They are all screaming their battle cries as their weapons cut into one another. Rikard’s group consists of more skilled warriors, and even in this panel we can see that they are dealing terrible wounds to their foes. NO DIALOGUE. �PAGE 11 11.1 Warrior 4 cuts down one of the wildmen. ​NO DIALOGUE. 11.2 Several savages leap onto Warrior 3, bringing him down and stabbing him with their swords as he screams. 1/WARRIOR 3:​N-No! 2/WARRIOR 3 (Scream):​Nnnoooooo— 11.3 Warrior 1 and Shad fight together, slashing and cutting at a tide of wildmen that come at them. 3/SHAD (Small):​Poor bastard. 4/WARRIOR 1:​Better ‘im than me. 11.4 Kirk and Rikard fight back to back. Kirk slashes at the wildmen with his axe. He whirls the weapon above his head that it almost looks like he’s going to take off. NO DIALOGUE