Thread:GazzaB9/@comment-24839525-20180409231326/@comment-30134917-20180410114320

A'ight. If you want some advice I'd recommend you'd get very descriptive. Talk about wind blowing in people's hair, talk about the clanking below characters' feet, even the smallest of details can work to get people in the game and think your world is truly real. Just don't go overboard, no one's gonna read fifty paragraphs of you talking about a guy's beard. :P