Talk:Ship War: The Dimensions Among Us/@comment-35299098-20190129230557

Good idea! I just have a few problems with it: •First of all, let’s start with the genre. It’s like everything is crammed within a small idea, and having your cake and eating it too usually ends up with you getting confused or what-not. I think the movie should be more organized into one genre. •Now, let’s talk about the TAWoG cameo. I feel like this is unneeded in a PG-13 movie with every genre imaginable, and plus, putting two different series in your movie would probably make people skeptical about it just being a cash-grab, in reality. Also, how would you get CN’s approval? •Now, I want to get over something that is really getting on my nerves and always does. The “godmodding” of the film’s outcome and overall preformance. There is no such thing as a perfect movie as you can tell by this review, and so you can’t just decide one day to have fictional critics enjoy every single nook and cranny of this film and have it beat Titanic in the box office, a memorable classic that shows the devastating moments of the sinking ship and gave a tribute to everyone affected, the one so famous that some millennials (or just me) have mistaken it for the only Titanic event ever. •Finally, the characters. Well, generally two, to be precise. First of all, every crime has a motive. Why is Gumball even a criminal in a mental hospital? If it’s because Penny broke up with him, why did that happen? How did he turn insane over her? Another thing is the YouTuber guy. Having a human in a world of anthropomorphic random stuff is kind of off, especially having him take a beloved character’s place. Now, I get this may have actually happened to this YouTuber or their inspiration, but having a huge trace of his description including how he is autistic and has anxiety and was cyber bullied is unnecessary bits that may not help shape the rest of the plot. It’s more like a pity tactic (reassuring you that I have nothing against this person). The randomness takes another step when you add that a real person is dating a fictional character. This is just a joke, and no offense, but I’m getting some Sans fangirl vibes here (please don’t take that seriously lol).

Despite all that, this film is really a great idea and I always love seeing our community grow and expand their ideas and imaginations. Have a fine rest of your day, and as Walt Disney says, “Keep moving forward!” (Yep, got that from the home page because I’m out of inspirational lines, oof.)