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A'ight. Here's my pitch:

Power takes place in a city full of superheroes. However, the new heroes don't really act like it. They're more in it for the fame than the actual hero work. That is except for the 18 year old Jaime Rains, who gains a super human ability. Only one problem: he doesn't know what it is or how it works. To learn how to use his powers, he joins the Super Project, the biggest superhero network in the world.

What do you think? do I need to change it a bit more?