User blog:Knottyorchid12/Second Pilot Attempt

a new pilot for you to take up

(It shows The DC Logo and cuts to a man in a interrogation room)

(a woman revealing herself to be Ellen Yin walks in meeting the man)

Ellen: Christopher Smith or is it Schmidt, troublemaker i presume?

Christopher: Not really a troublemaker dollface and you are?

Ellen Yin: Ellen Yin detective of Gotham, You been on the radar for quite some time.

(she holds up a picture of a superhero figure)

Ellen: Is this you?

Christopher 'laughs' Yeah that's me. Do I care if i give out my idenity No, I don't

Ellen: Ok then... tell me about it

Christopher: Sure you can handle it sweetheart?

Ellen: Try me.

(it shows a peace symbol and it cuts to title An HBO Original Series then shows the logo PEACEMAKER)

(It cuts to the year 1964)

Title 1964

Christopher: (VO) where do I begin? Welp has to start back when I was a kid, You see my dad was an army officer who eventually became a statesman and I was pretty much an only child, When it comes to me I was always into peace, As a kid I would always try to be peaceful for anything.

(It shows a bully picking on a boy)

Boy: HELP HELP!!!! HELP!!!!!!

Bully: Sorry but nobody is going to come help you

(Christopher walks to them)

Christopher: Uh excuse me but he deserves to be let go

Bully: Or what kid.

Christopher: I'm trying to go peaceful here.

Bully (puts him down and picks Christopher) What's your name meat?

Christopher: Ch..Christopher.

(Bully throws him at a wall)

Bully: Well your little peace thing isn't gonna work for me and for that here is a reminder of reality (he punches him in the eye)

(Christopher gets hit and falls down)

Ross: Thank you so much for saving me, The names Llwellyn Ross Llwellyn

Christopher: Well its nice to meet you Ross I'm Christopher

(It cuts to Christopher home and seeing his dad Wolfgang Schmidt)

Christopher: Hi dad,

(Wolfgang walks in seeing his son)

Wolfgang: Son what happened to you?

Christopher: A bully punched me in the eye because I was trying to defend someone from getting bullied.

Wolfgang: Son I'm proud of you, You had the courage to stand up for someone and that took guts son. But even sometimes it doesn't work.

Christopher: What do you mean?

Christopher (VO): That day my dad taught me something very important that I would take to heart...Peace isn't always the answer and that there could be times I would have to stick to the opposite of Peace and thats violence.

(Sorry if i gotta end it here that's all of the first pilot i can do but sure it's starting small but i hope it could be big soon)