Thread:Knottyorchid12/@comment-24839525-20190314192417/@comment-26163780-20190315162606

The thing is you don't know how to write romance properly.

You just have two characters ship sail immediately, you don't develop it.

You just have them meet and a few seconds later they're snogging each other.

Consider this a proper writing excercise

P.S. What does Laura look like (just describe her, no pics please)