Thread:Muppetlover16/@comment-4731816-20181218214505/@comment-26163780-20181222004729

O.K. Mr. "My OCs are the best and you should all like them" No wonder I call you an egotistical chowderhead, 'cause ya are you daft potato!

The thing is, we don't know what Lorcan's character is suposed to be, other than, "he's apparently a Pokémon trainer and an interdimensional traveler, and also pansexual (but mostly straight) and he also has red hair." And his siblings aren't too fleshed out either, "my brother is a goth and a pessimist and my little sister has pink hair" (I think, or was it one of the cousins that had the pink hair?) When they all share a common surname it's hard to distinguish them from each other, other than that specific trait they're given. People would like your OCs if they were less flat. You know what I mean mate? In theory the concepts for the characters seem good on paper, they need to be developed further is all I'm saying.

Come on don't get sad or anything, you sound like you're gonna cry.