Spider-Man (Tobey Maguire Fan-Redo)

I know that Spider-Man 3, which came out in 2007 from Sony Pictures, got very bad reception and reviews. However, this page will express what I think they could have done with the source material, the script, and the characters, instead of making it one huge mess with thousands of plot holes and plot lines. This is fan-made and I will be doing my own Spider-Man 4, 5, Venom movie, and 6. I love and appreciate the character of Spider-Man and he has always been one of my favorite characters of Marvel Comics. DO NOT EDIT UNLESS WITH THE PERMISSION OF HASAMU JENKINS.

Like always, the movie is directed under the brilliant mind of Sam Raimi and will feature returning cast members such as Tobey Maguire, Rosemary Harris, Kirsten Dunst, James Franco, and J.K. Simmons.

Cast

 * Tobey Maguire as Peter Parker / Spider-Man
 * James Franco as Harry Osborn / Hobgoblin
 * Kirsten Dunst as Mary Jane Watson
 * Ryan Gosling as Eddie Brock
 * J.K. Simmons as J. Jonah Jameson
 * Rosemary Harris as Aunt May
 * Elizabeth Banks as Betty Brant
 * Colin Farrelll as Herman Schultz / Shocker
 * Dylan Baker as Dr. Curt Connors
 * Bill Nunn as Robbie Robertson
 * Russell Crowe as Captain George Stacy
 * John Paxton as Bernard
 * William Dafoe as Norman Osborn (flashbacks)
 * Cliff Robertson as Uncle Ben (flashbacks)

Plot
A year after Otto Octavius nearly destroyed New York, Peter Parker embraces his role as the Wall-Crawler of New York, as well as enjoying his glory days with the many fans and admirers, doning his name as a hero. However, after Harry previously found out about Peter's identity as Spider-Man, Peter and Harry's friendship falls apart and Harry is up to no good after discovering Norman's lair. As Peter hunts down for Harry and Harry's revenge quest leads him to trying to kill his own friend, this battle determines the long conflict between Peter and Harry...

Story

 * 1) The film starts off zooming out from the Osborn Mansion, where Harry is in the Goblin Lair and the credits for the cast and crew role as Harry trains himself to fight by pushing himself to the limits with his strength, then using the Goblin formula to make him ten times stronger than an average human being. Harry goes out, after in serious pain, and looks at a picture of his father, reminding himself what Peter has "taken away" from Harry. Harry throws the picture across the room and glares at his father's old glider, but renovates the glider to make it more deadly by adding more explosive areas and landing areas. Harry then goes out into the mansion, looking out upon the beautiful night sky in New York. He takes a peak at a picture with him, Peter, and Mary Jane, punching it, staring at the Mary Jane portion of the photo.
 * 2) Meanwhile, a bank robbery erupts at the Manhattan Square Bank and a dozen armed thugs shoot up into the ceiling and threaten the workers for the money in the vault. The armed thugs, while ramping through the money, are on the phone with their gang leader, Herman Schultz, who dons a yellow and red wrestler-looking outfit with shock gauntlets, calling himself the Shocker. Schultz breaks into the back door of the bank with his shock gauntlets, knocking out two police officers and yells threats across the bank. Him and his thugs open the other vault and mentions Spider-Man. Spider-Man appears at the bank, stopping the thugs easily. However, Shocker and a couple of his henchmen escape with the money and go to their car. The thug drives and Shocker is in the passenger seat, angrily throwing curses at Spider-Man, while trying to use his gauntlets to electrify him. Spider-Man gets on the car and stops it, beating the thugs and having a one-on-one with Shocker, winning. Spider-Man ties up Shocker for the cops and the NYPD sees a note on the ground that says, "Courtesy of Your Friendly Neighborhood Spider-Man". NYPD takes Shocker and the thugs back at the bank to Ryker's Island.
 * 3) Spider-Man swings peacefully around New York, thinking about the night that Harry found out he was Spider-Man and almost killed him, having violent flashbacks. He lightens himself up when he realizes that Mary Jane has a Broadway show in short time and rushes over there. He changes back to Peter Parker, where Peter arrives just on time before the show starts. Peter watches and admires Mary Jane and after the show, Peter goes backstage to congratulate her. As they talk about her performance, Mary Jane mentions Harry, who she is worried about. Peter explains to Mary Jane that Harry has not spoken to him in a year and that he is afraid Harry is up to no good. Mary Jane then holds Peter's hand to comfort him and reminds Peter that Harry will always be the good person he is. Peter kisses Mary Jane, lightening his mood and then walking out of the center into the sidewalk, where he spots Harry. Peter rushes to Harry, as he goes to his limo. Peter tries to reason with Harry and "explain things" to him. Harry mentions Norman and tells Peter to try to "raise from the grave". Peter mentions to Harry that he is his friend and that he never hurt Norman. Harry enters the limo and ignores Peter. Peter looks into the distance as his best friend drives away.
 * 4) Peter swings back to his apartment, where he showers, then lies down. He gives Mary Jane a call and tells her that he ran into Harry in front of her performing center. Mary Jane is, at first, relived that Harry and Peter are at least talking, but Peter mentions the fact that Harry is ignoring him and that he still is under the mindset that Spider-Man, or Peter Parker, killed his father a couple of years ago back during Spider-Man's early days. Mary Jane warns Peter not to "try anything stupid" and Peter accepts the possible fact that he will not.
 * 5) Harry, in the mansion's lair now, looks at the Goblin mask that Norman wore when he was the Green Goblin. Harry uses one of Norman's old decoys, a hard yellow hood with a silver goblin mask, as well as a silver suit. Harry suits up and feels satisfaction and breaks the mirror in his mansion, looking in another mirror, seeing the Green Goblin in the reflection. In the hallucination, Norman unmasks himself as the Green Goblin and claims that he has never been prouder of Harry. Harry then goes back into the lair, where he sees the renovated glider. Harry thinks into his mind and Norman echoes, "Avenge my death, son..."
 * 6) Peter, on his scooter, rides to Aunt May's new apartment in which she bought (during the events of Spider-Man 2) and catches up with Aunt May. As they exchange kind words about each others' lives, Aunt May asks Peter about Mary Jane and if he truly loves her. Peter tells Aunt May he truly admires her as a girlfriend, but that he is not ready for marriage or anything serious. Aunt May reminds Peter that when the time comes, Aunt May will give Peter the wedding ring that Uncle Ben gave Aunt May years ago when he proposed to her. Aunt May swears to her life that she will keep it for Peter, as Peter and Aunt May hug and honor Uncle Ben. Peter exits Aunt May's apartment and goes on his scooter to ride back to his apartment.
 * 7) J. Jonah Jameson, the long-time editor in chief of the Daily Bugle, jokingly has a long conversation with Hoffman and Robbie about a new name for the Daily Bugle, as Jameson finds it dull. As Hoffman throws Jameson ridiculous names, Jameson's hilarious anger gets the best of him and Betty reminds Jameson to watch his anger, as his wife has given him pills. Jameson, trying to remain civil and calm with his conversation with Hoffman, is then reminded by Betty to take pills, only to try to take one and Betty makes him spill the pills. A blonde and built blonde man goes up to Betty's desk and kindly asks if he could speak to Jameson. The young man introduces himself as Eddie Brock and mentions that his childhood best friend works at the Bugle, meaning that Peter and Eddie were long-time friends until Eddie went off to boarding school, graduated, and moved back to New York to work at the Bugle. Eddie enters Jameson's office and Jameson yells at Eddie for coming in so late, since it is the dawn of night. Eddie gives Jameson pictures of skyscrapers and introduces himself as a childhood friend of Peter. Eddie comments on Jameson's hard hand shake and uses it as a joke, in which Jameson hilariously takes offense of. Eddie goes on a brief discussion about his background, saying he went to boarding school, met Peter before his boarding school days since their parents were accomplices, and now moves back to New York to start a life with his girlfriend, Becky Underwood. Jameson nods to Eddie and that Eddie looks forward to working with Jameson and Peter. Jameson gets a call from a active Daily Bugle critic, claiming that a glider is seen on the skies. Jameson laughs at this and that the cops are around the city, having Jameson tell Eddie and Hoffman to get the helicopter.
 * 8) Meanwhile, Peter is at home, listening to the police radios and communications from the NYPD, having Captain George Stacy state that there has been reports of a flying glider and a suspicious looking figure in the skyline of Manhattan near the Empire State Building. Peter, concerned and confused, puts on his suit and swings to the Empire State Building. Peter, thinking to himself, fears that a clone of the Green Goblin has risen, however, his spider senses start going off the charts, but he cannot see a thing of danger around. Slow-motion; Peter hears a glider run towards him and the Hobgoblin is about to impale him, but Spider-Man jumps over and webs to the glider. Spider-Man notices that Hobgoblin looks even more terrifying than the original and fights him in the sky, struggling to hold a fight. Spider-Man and Hobgoblin bring the fight lower to the western side of Manhattan. Hobgoblin rams Spider-Man into the a building and Hobgoblin. Hobgoblin's voice sounds manic, but somewhat familiar in Spider-Man's senses. Spider-Man dodges Hobgoblin's bomb throws, which causes debris to fall unto the ground. They continue to have a fight through the skies, as Captain George Stacy is speeding in his cop car with his units and team following him, as well as a helicopter with Eddie taking pictures of Hobgoblin's fight with Spider-Man. Spider-Man, looking over during the fight, sees Eddie and asks himself what Eddie is doing in town. Spider-Man takes the fight to Hobgoblin to a small alleyway, where the cops and Daily Bugle officials cannot follow them. Spider-Man weakens during the fight and Hobgoblin begins throwing blades and bombs, while Spider-Man struggles to dodge them. Spider-Man throws a blade back in Hobgoblin's face, having Hobgoblin smile and Spider-Man asks, "Who are you?" Hobgoblin claims he is Spider-Man's worst nightmare and glides away, while Spider-Man swings to a nearby rooftop and says to himself, "Where do all these guys come from?" and then proceeds to take the blade sticking off his back. Peter wonders to himself if this Hobgoblin has any ties to the original Green Goblin... Peter looks into the distance, as Hobgoblin glides away, laughing the similar manic laugh that Norman had as the Green Goblin.
 * 9) Mary Jane exits the theater where she performs after a rehearsal for the next upcoming show she will perform on. While she exits and gets many compliments from other performers and fans, she walks on the streets of New York to head home, only to pick up a newspaper with one critic stating that Mary Jane has "horrible taste" and does not deserve to be on Broadway. While she reads it on her walk, she throws it and sighs. Mary Jane sees Spider-Man swinging by and everyone applauding. Mary Jane smiles and shows happiness for Peter's career as Spider-Man. As Spider-Man is swinging, Mary Jane calls him and Mary Jane asks him about dinner plans for celebrating Peter's success as Spider-Man and Mary Jane's success of Broadway. Mary Jane mentions the critic and Peter tells her not to worry, since Spider-Man gets teased and criticized all the time, especially by J. Jonah Jameson and the Daily Bugle.
 * 10) The camera zooms from the Daily Bugle during the day and J. Jonah Jameson discusses the event of Hobgoblin and Spider-Man's fight with Hoffman and Robbie, telling them that "first, Green Goblin, then the infamous Otto Octavius. Now another goblin. What's next? A guy with a eight mechanical arms instead of four?!" Jameson demands the headline to be "Masked Menace vs. Green Goblin Replica" and Peter enters the room, having Jameson tell Peter to at least call in. Peter admits he has no pictures with Spider-Man and Hobgoblin and Jameson yells at him, until Eddie enters the room and Peter is surprised. Eddie and Peter hug each other and ask how each are. Jameson tells them to have their "little friendship reunion" outside. Peter and Eddie walk out together and Eddie talks about his life and Peter talks about his. Flash forward, Peter and Eddie go to a small diner to catch up with their lives and they still get along very great, just like when they were children. As the conversation is going, Eddie talks about his "girl", Becky Underwood, who is a model in New York and is living in a penthouse, while he is currently living in a decent apartment in Chinatown. Peter and Eddie discuss Peter's college life, as Peter is currently 21 years of age and Eddie is 22. Eddie mentions Harry, who Eddie knows is Peter's best friend and even jokes that Harry is Eddie's replacement during his absence. Peter explains that Harry and him are not currently exchanging any conversation, since Harry holds a grudge on Peter. Eddie asks why and Peter slowly changes the subject regarding Mary Jane and Broadway.
 * 11) Meanwhile, Harry is shirtless and looking into the mirror of his room, seeing no wounds and feeling more satisfied now that Peter, or Spider-Man, is physically injured. Harry gets a call from Bernard, telling Harry that he is going to out for a couple of days for a butler meeting. Harry accepts and says to himself, "That gives us a chance to kill Peter".
 * 12) Peter, who is at Empire State, is studying and taking notes in Dr. Connors's class and cannot seem to pay attention, not only because of physical pain after fighting Hobgoblin, but because of his tough friendship with Harry. Peter deeply thinks about Harry, while in quiet pain of his injury. Dr. Connors, glaring at Peter, asks him if he is paying attention. Peter assures Connors that he is. Connors confronts Peter after class and asks Peter if he is alright, since Peter is doing very well in the class lately and no longer being in scheduling conflicts. Peter assures he is fine and goes away, as a look of concern on Connors's face arises when he looks at Peter walking away.
 * 13) Peter proceeds to walk down the street, where he sets up a dinner reservation at 7:30PM two nights from the current for him and Mary Jane. He gets a fancy card and walks over Mary Jane's apartment and slides a card under her door and exiting the apartment complex, where he looks at Mary Jane and sees her as beautiful. Mary Jane, while reading more critics in the newspaper and being disappointed by the reviews, notices the fancy card under her door and immediately knows it has something to do with the upcoming dinner. Mary Jane flips over the card and sees a note that says, "See you at the dinner, beautiful". Mary Jane smiles after seeing that her hero has kind words for her.
 * 14) Back at the Daily Bugle, J. Jonah Jameson is talking over the phone with his wife about the upcoming Spider-Man ceremony the following day and Jameson hilariously whines that he does not want to attend the ceremony and yells that Spider-Man is a menace. His wife tells him to calm down and Jameson sighs. Robbie knocks into the office and asks Jameson about the deadline on the Hobgoblin article and Hoffman wonders if Hobgoblin will make another appearance at the ceremony and attack Spider-Man. Jameson jokes that Hobgoblin should to put Spider-Man out of his misery.
 * 15) The ceremony begins the next day with Peter smiling and cheering up for the fact that everyone in New York loves Spider-Man and all he has done for the city in the few years he has been a vigilante. Peter imitates the dance along with the jazz band and marchers. Eddie is there to take pictures of Spider-Man and sees Peter there, shaking his hand and Eddie is eager to meet Peter's girlfriend, Mary Jane. Peter finds Mary Jane, who is casually standing alone watching the marchers and jazz band. Peter introduces Eddie to Mary Jane, where Eddie is humble to Mary Jane, while Mary Jane just casually introduces herself. Eddie comments that Mary Jane is "not much of a talker, but she is beautiful. You're a lucky man, Peter". Mary Jane blushes and Peter asks Mary Jane why she seems sad. Mary Jane assures Peter that she is fine and Peter guesses that Mary Jane is down because of the one critic. Peter repeats himself by saying that critics are normal for celebrities and heroes. Mary Jane tells Peter she does not want to talk about it and reassures Peter that this ceremony should be revolved around Spider-Man and Peter, not Mary Jane. Peter kisses Mary Jane and tells her he needs to take pictures. On the television reports, the ceremony is going very good and the reporter says more than half of the city's population has shown up at the ceremony. Harry watches this on his television at the mansion and the camera shows Spider-Man, who is on the building waiting for his cue. Harry turns off the television and throws his blade at a dummy in the lair, in which the dummy's head falls off.
 * 16) Eddie tries to find where Peter is and even asks Mary Jane where he is and Mary Jane replies with, "Probably taking someone's picture". Mary Jane then attempts to call Harry and try to convince him to come down to the ceremony with Peter and Mary Jane. Harry actually answers Mary Jane's phone and Mary Jane is relieved and Harry is genuinely kind to Mary Jane and asks Mary Jane about the ceremony and make sure that Peter is not there. Mary Jane tries to tell Harry to just try and be good friend with Peter again, but Harry declines and claims he will be down in a minute. Harry picks up his mask and hood. Spider-Man, on the rooftop, looks around to make sure no trouble is going on for his "big day". The woman gives the speech about Spider-Man, stating that he is the saver of children, men, and women alike and will most likely continue to protect and watch over New York until the end of his life. Spider-Man swings in and as Eddie takes dozens of photos of Spider-Man, the mayor, and the woman and Mary Jane applauding, Mary Jane looks around, confused at why Harry has not shown up to the ceremony yet. While everyone is cheering, Mary Jane eerily hears a familiar laugh... the Hobgoblin. Mary Jane remembers the Green Goblin's laugh on the George Washington Bridge a couple years back and is haunted by this. She notices Hobgoblin glaring at her from the distance and is terrified, as the rest of the crowd and Spider-Man notices. Spider-Man says, "Oh no..." Spider-Man then swings above and as the bomb, thrown by Hobgoblin, is about to hit the crowd, Spider-Man webs it back to Hobgoblin. The crowd cheers and Mary Jane is still left puzzled about where Harry is. Mary Jane watches as Spider-Man fights the Hobgoblin in clear daylight, remembering the Green Goblin from years ago. Spider-Man fights Hobgoblin, still having Hobgoblin take the upper hand on Spider-Man and dominates him. Spider-Man takes the fight to the ground after kicking Hobgoblin off his glider. As the fight gets more brutal, Spider-Man's aggression gets the best of him and he webs the mask and forces it to pull off and kicks Hobgoblin to the alley. Hobgoblin turns around and reveals himself to be Harry, leaving Spider-Man puzzled and shocked and he says, "Harry?" Harry tells Peter that Peter does not deserve anything and as Captain Stacy and his unit arrives, Harry punches Spider-Man leaving him on the floor, putting on his Hobgoblin mask, and gliding away. Stacy and his men help Spider-Man get up and agree that the Hobgoblin poses more of a threat than the Green Goblin did.
 * 17) Jameson, who is in his office at the Bugle, looks at his email and sees that Peter sent him pictures of the ceremony with all the Spider-Man memorials and marches, as well as the disturbing fight between Spider-Man and Hobgoblin. Jameson sees that Peter called in sick, being the factor in why he sent his photos in by email.
 * 18) Peter, just leaving the laundry store, goes back to his apartment to change into a fancy suit and tie for his dinner with Mary Jane and takes the card of the reservation with him. Peter tries to stay positive, but after discovering Harry is Hobgoblin, Peter cannot. Peter enters the french restaurant and must hilariously get past the waiter, who demands that he speaks french. Peter then takes a seat in the restaurant table, waiting for Mary Jane to pop up. Peter goes over what he should say to Mary Jane regarding Harry and the Hobgoblin. Mary Jane appears, looking stunning, but still seems negative in her mood. Peter pulls the seat for Mary Jane and, at first, the conversation starts very awkward as they both are lost with words and do not know what to say to each other. Mary Jane explains she feels heartbroken at the moment because of the many critics criticizing her show, as well as how she is worried about Harry. Peter tries to tell Mary Jane that the critics do not matter and that Spider-Man gets them all the time, but Mary Jane starts an argument that not everything is about Spider-Man and that Peter should try to understand her situation. During the small argument, Mary Jane apologizes and just says she is almost worried about Harry. Peter looks down and hesitates to tell her what happened during the ceremony fight with Hobgoblin. Peter quietly tells Mary Jane that Harry is the Hobgoblin and although Mary Jane is left speechless, she starts yelling at Peter for driving Harry into this mess. Peter claims that Harry has always thought that Spider-Man killed Norman Osborn, but he did not, as the glider impaled his own body. Mary Jane repeats that she is worried about Harry and that Peter should go talk to him himself to prevent Harry, or even Peter, from doing anything stupid. Peter nods and Mary Jane leaves the dinner, while Peter is left wondering...
 * 19) Peter walks out of the restaurant after Mary Jane barges out after the argument about Harry and their lives and walks around. He arrives home, where Mr. Diktovich funnily asks him for rent and Peter pays him the $150. Peter enters his apartment and closes the doors. He sits down, looking at the mirror and seeing the Spider-Man reflection. Peter goes into the hallway to try and call Mary Jane to consul with her after the not-so-well dinner they had. The phone goes to voicemail and Peter tries his best to apologize and that the situation with Harry is clouding Peter's judgement to have a good time with MJ. Mary Jane tries to pick up and Peter hangs up last second, only to get another call. This time; it is from Captain George Stacy, telling Peter that him and his Aunt May need to go up to the New York Police Department by morning of the next day. Stacy eerily explains to Peter that he has more information on the murder of Uncle Ben a couple of years ago. Peter's heart drops and hangs up the phone.
 * 20) The next day, Peter and Aunt May are sitting at the New York Police Department office of George Stacy, where he explains that originally, the press and May and Peter alike thought that Dennis Carradine was the Ben Parker's murderer. However, police say that they delved more into the scene and found out that Carradine was just an alias of the actual murderer; Herman Schultz. Peter then immediately recognizes Schultz as the Shocker, who robbed the bank (at the beginning of the movie). Stacy explains that Schultz has broken out of Ryker's Island and is out on the loose. Peter, in disbelief, begins yelling at Captain Stacy, getting in an intense argument and complains that Ben's killer is still out there, even after four years of believing Carradine was the killer. Flash forward, Peter is at his apartment, standing up and listening closely to the police comms, only to hear that an elderly man has been brutally murdered outside the man's car, having flashbacks of Uncle Ben. Peter is waiting for something to appear about Herman Schultz, or the Shocker. The door is ringing and Mary Jane is there, worried about Peter after Aunt May told Mary Jane about the truth about Uncle Ben's death. Mary Jane is afraid that Peter is still thinking about the dinner and Mary Jane says "this is more important, not that dinner". Peter tries to make excuses that he is fine and Mary Jane tries to be there for Peter, but Peter assures her that he needs some alone time. Mary Jane is about to exit and says, "Everyone needs help sometimes, Peter. Even Spider-Man..." Peter then puts on his suit, listening on the comms, having violent crime happening around the city and he is not helping. He falls asleep and has flashbacks of Uncle Ben's death, imagining Herman Schultz shooting Ben Parker, with Dennis Carradine stealing the car. Peter gets angry and suddenly wakes up at 1:00AM