User blog:Knottyorchid12/Pilot Attempt

my attempt at a pilot for you to pick up or claim...hope its good

Transcript
(it starts with showing a mystical forest)

Voice: Through the forests comes a mysterious place unseen to man or women. What is this place you may question, Inside this forest lies a hidden place where younglings are trained to kill.

(it shows the logo and it cuts to a boy in school waiting for the bell to ring)

Jerome: Cmon school's almost up!

(he keeps waiting there getting ready to leave two girls walk past him)

Alice: He's been sitting at that clock waiting for school to be over for 4 minutes.

Katherine: What do you think is important to him.

Alice: Well he has been holding that letter in his hand wonder what it means?

(The bell rings and school is out)

Jerome: Finally. (he races off)

Alice: Hmmm I have an idea Katherine, What do you say we follow to where he goes.

Katherine: I don't know Jerome is a good friend in all but i don't wanna know where he always goes during spring summer fall and winter break.

Alice: C'mon we can at least find out together.

Katherine: Ok Ok

(they sneak off and follow Jerome as he sneaks through a forest)

Alice: Ooh mysterious.

Katherine: Now why would he be going in the forest? I mean there's bugs and mosquitos and twigs could get in your hair.

Alice: You worry to much. (she proceeds to follow Jerome)

Katherine: Alice wait!!! (she follows through the forest as they both enter and see a huge school)

Alice: Whoaaaaa!

Katherine: Wait what is a entire school doing here through the forest?

(they look to see students training to use weapons like guns and swords and daggers)

Alice: This looks incredible!!!

Katherine: How is this possible?

Alice: Who knows lets check it out.

(they look to see students learning weapons and some hanging out)

Katherine: Alice am I the only one seeing this this is an entire school for training to use weapons but where is Jerome?

(Suddenly a figure comes up behind them and grabs the two)

Figure: Well looks like we got some easedroppers, The Principal would love you two!!!

(the figure starts taking the two to the principals)

(the figure sits them down at the principals desk)

Principal: Well Well Well look what we got here a bunch of easedroppers, lurking from the shadows

Katherine: Were sorry we easedropped we were just trying to find our friend Jerome.

Principal: So you come to this school undetected all cause you want to see what your friend is up to??.....thats just what we need at this school.

Katherine and Alice: What??

Principal: But stealthing ain't that easy you got me silent and go in for the kill and not make a lot of noise. But I think with a little work and the right weapons you two could be great at stealth.

Katherine: I'm sorry but....what is this place?

Principal: Come let me show you.

(he walks out to the school and shows them the school)

Principal Paxtriss: I am Principal Paxtriss founder of this school This is a school to train those to be elite assassins for missions. We do at times go out and scope the world but you get the idea.

(Jerome meets up with Katherine and Alice)

Jerome: Principal Paxtriss what are you doing with my friends?

Alice: Jerome you come here during your vacations?

Jerome: Of course I've been here for 2 years,

Katherine: Why didn't you tell us this was where you go?

Principal Paxtriss: i can answer that, We have a reason this place was hidden we can't let any parent know they're assassins otherwise we'd be in serious trouble thats why we have it in the forest.

Alice: But what about the parents? what are they to be told if they wanna know where their child went?

Principal Paxtriss: We tell them their at camp or when its not summer tell them to stay behind to catch up on work.

Katherine: I see

Principal Paxtriss: But you two could work great as assassins. What do you say?

Katherine: Well idk..

Alice: Katherine this is a place destined to be trained in the arts of assaination don't you wanna be a part of it

Principal Paxtriss: If you ever change your mind (hands her letter) Your free to enter anytime.

Katherine: Thanks..But i gotta think about it

Alice: But i sure want in.

Principal Paxtriss: Excellent Miss you'll start first day tomorrow morning.

(Katherine starts to walk out of the forest while holding the letter)

Katherine: (Mind) Do I really want to be accepted in a school where i kill?....

(she looks back and walks away while placing the letter in her backpack as she looks back one more time)

Katherine: I think I could give it a chance.

(she walks away showing the forest as it fades to black)

(End of Short Pilot)