Thread:GazzaB9/@comment-24839525-20180610023437/@comment-30134917-20180616004321

It's a'ight so far, though I do have two things to say. One is a nitpick and the other is very easily fixed.

Nitpick: Alfred Ryker's name seems a little too similar to Alfred Stryker from Batman.

Easily fixed: I think you should change it to "Charles Stone/The Breaker" since in your comic The Breaker is an alter ego Charles switches to, while in my comic "Sunny" is a nickname the media gave Miles because they didn't know his actual name.