Thread:GazzaB9/@comment-24839525-20180918152151/@comment-30134917-20181003165807

Quick thing Coolot, this is just a bit of criticism of something you do, while writing a script page with another person you tend to end a sentence on a semi-cliffhanger. If you're gonna do that I recommend you finish the cliffhanger yourself, since the person your working with doesn't actually know how the cliffhanger ends. For example, if you end a sentence with "the man takes off his hood" obviously the hooded person's identity is a big reveal but the person you're writing with doesn't know who is under the hood.

I'm not saying any of this to make you feel bad, angry, sad, etc, I'm just trying to help and I'm sorry if I do make you feel that way.