User blog:MarvelDCandFantasyFanBoy12/A Pilot Anyone can Claim

I am going to be writing a pilot for a show. I'll message everyone when the pilot is done and this will be a first one takes all thing. So I suggest you read through it when it is done and see if you really want to claim it. Excuse the ok writing.

Transcript
It begins in a city that is extremely futuristic as a few flying cars are flying around as it cuts to an energy plant as a group of people in masks break in it. They steal the Valitonium without anybody noticing as it cuts to Scimitar Industries as the CEO Michael Fae gets an alert of it. He presses a button and a human-like robot rises from a pod as he touches the robot. His eyes glow. He notices a red dot on a holographic map. He sprouts mechanical wings and a jet and flies off. It cuts to a secondary Valitonium plant as Cypher, Adam and May break in and grab a few crates of it as suddenly Ronin flies it. They pull out Valitonium powered swords as Ronin turns his hand into a blade. An epic battle begins as the three thieves attack Ronin and he fights back. He begins to hold his ground as suddenly Adam gets thrown into a crate of Valitonium as he screams. He walks out now glowing with energy. Adam grabs both Cypher and May and throws them out of the facility and he turns to Ronin. He fires an unstable energy blast at Ronin as he dodges. They continue the fight until Ronin locates a Valitonium energy holder as he leads Adam there. Adam charges at Ronin as he traps Adam inside of the canister. He leaves Adam in the cannister and flies out. The pilot ends.
 * ???:  Remember, all we need is a few crates of Valitonium.
 * ???: We all know that Cypher.
 * Cypher: I am making sure you and May don't screw up, Adam.
 * Adam: We have never screwed up.
 * May: Yeah!
 * Cypher: You can never be too safe.
 * Michael: Of course...
 * Michael: Ronin activate.
 * Ronin: Yes, Mr. Fae?
 * Michael: Just call me Michael. Anyways, I have designed you to combat threats to this beautiful city. And I have just been reported that a Valitonium plant has been robbed.
 * Ronin: Valitonium?
 * Michael: An extremely radioactive energy source that could power dangerous weaponry.
 * Ronin: That can't be in the hands of criminals.
 * Michael: I know. I have no idea where they are going to strike next. They bypassed all security.
 * Ronin: Like incorpreal entities.
 * Michael: Of course you know what ghosts are but not what Valitonium is.
 * Ronin: The scientists who worked on me probably didn't add everything to my database. No worries, I know perfectly how to work my weaponry.
 * Michael: Phew. That's good.
 * Michael: That must be our Incorporeal Thieves's location. I am wiring it to your database.
 * Ronin: That's good.
 * Cypher: I thought you disrupted all security May.
 * May: I did. That virus shut down everything.
 * Ronin: Freeze Incorpreal Thieves!
 * Adam: That actually isn't a bad name...
 * Cypher: Shut up Adam!
 * Adam: Sorry.
 * Cypher: Anyways (points at Ronin) who are you?
 * Ronin: Call me Ronin. The protector of Neo Chicago.
 * Cypher: Very well then... I guess we'll deal with you the hard way.
 * Cypher: You're good. Let's see if you are capable to defeat the three of us though.
 * Cypher: Adam?
 * Adam: I feel powerful. Like I don't need you or May anymore.
 * Cypher: W-w-what?
 * Ronin: What are you?
 * Adam: Call me... LIVING ENERGY! And prepare to die Ronin!
 * Adam: Let me out!
 * Ronin: No.

Epilogue
So yeah I finished the pilot so hurry and see if you wanna claim this or not.