Thread:JessicaFin23/@comment-26330539-20161104012455/@comment-24839263-20161104040217

I think it seems like a very good plan. Here's how my method of improving Sarah's pages works: If the grammar and spelling on the page need fixing, I take them and fix them, so that they'll look just right, and sometimes I take some information on some of the pages and reword it, giving the page better information. If the page is about a character, I either rewrite some parts of the page or rewrite it completely to give the character some personality. I do the same to some of her other pages. When I think that Sarah has done too much over one topic on too many pages, I rename the pages and rewrite them so they can be about something else. If Sarah sees the changes that I made on her pages, she'll learn about many different topics that she can write about. As we go along, we might be able to teach her and help her understand the different varieties of writing. We can do this, Rachel! We're not going to give up!