Board Thread:New on Idea Wiki/@comment-33557053-20180101172614

Requested by Jadhostgamer072.

This is one of Jad's first movies, and he says it sucks. I went to go check myself, and to my surprise... it does suck. It has a lot of sins too. Time to sin it.

1. A full minute of logos!

2. What's with the AJ kid? Is he supposed to be the jerk of the movie?

3. What's the Dad's problem? All he did was read a text message by anonymous and he automatically decided that the mom hated him?

4. Chicken and rice tastes good, according to Dad.

5. The plot is so phoned in. It rushes through everything.

6. Legit line from the movie: "Wanna eat egg and bacon?" HAHA THAT GRAMMAR.

7. Chad's mom grounds him because we needed some sort of GoAnimate logic in this movie.

8. But really, is everyone in this movie an a-hole?

9. Omar floods the house and the Mom doesn't ground him over it.

10. "Character has an evil plan and lightning strikes" cliche.

11. Legit line from the movie: "Hey idiot Chaddy" without a period. OMG WHAT A BEAUTIFUL ROAST. TEN OUT OF F-ING TEN. BRAVO! BRAVO!

12. Also: "You Suck". Suck is capitalized for no reason and there's no period again. Great grammar! Now I can see why Jad hates this movie. It's so poorly written.

13. "Main character is bullied" cliche.

14. Better idea: The Dad divorces but the Mom tells the kids to go to the Dad's house and then Chad cries and says he's a bad man. The Mom calms him down, and Chad's cool with it. They visit Dad, and Dad first hates them but then develops into appreciating them and they live together with the Dad's new girlfriend. SEE? I THOUGHT OF A BETTER PLOT!

15. This movie has the same character names as ROBLOX: The Movie.

16. Sony Pictures Animation.

TOTAL SIN COUNTER: 16

SENTENCE: BAD GRAMMAR BONUS ROUND

I am Chad, the luckiest child in the family, i spend my days playing video games and stuff. When my mother also tells me what to do, do i listen? Well heck no! Well, though, i do have a good expirence when it comes to roads and georgraphy!

I's arent capitalized, and "well heck no" doesn't have an apostrophe. Also Chad is not lucky, that is a cliche.

Their now done eating and now Josh is coming downstairs!

They're, not there.

okay... I will tell on you

No capitalization on okay.

TOTAL SIN COUNTER: 836

SENTENCE: WANT AN EGG AND BACON? What's next? You decide! First to 6 wins! Pokemon Sun & Moon: The Movie ROBLOX: The Movie Ted 3 The LEGO Dimensions Movie Captain Cole If you wanna suggest me something, come on down to my message wall!  